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The Rise, and the Fall

Views (70) Passion Created on 3-12-08 Flag
But what if I'm not understanding, the love in and out? What if I'm not the one getting second feelings? I rise today. May I say, i dont' love you. (I'm a brilliant liar?) You broke me and today I fall. But through it all, my rise and my fall, I can still be the outcast and the one no one needs to hear. I am the only one here who said,"Why me?" But through it all, my rise and fall, it was pretty damn fun.
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On May 7th 2008 chickp96 Said :
chickp96 ^.^ OMG XD LOVE IT
On March 21st 2008 xxMCRxROXxx Said :
xxMCRxROXxx woah. this is very good. i love it. (:
On March 19th 2008 greenme14 Said :
greenme14 Ahh..... Love it...
On March 18th 2008 1PanPan Said :
1PanPan Sweet
On March 14th 2008 gusty13 Said :
gusty13 kool
On March 12th 2008 mcrfan4life66 Said :
mcrfan4life66 Awesome!
On March 12th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said :
tumblegrl1994 Pretty good! Awesome job!