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Strings
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Created on 7-9-07
I must ask why?
And, Who am I?
I'm drowning in a sea of faces,
desperately searching for traces,
of what, I've now long forgotten,
of something always lost, and re-begotten.
Surrounded by good friends, never felt so alone,
A wind sweeps the crowd and chills only me to the bone,
bringing to me the longing for the euphoria of dreams.
Invisible strings pulling me apart at the seams,
stuffing spilling out, never felt so exposed,
no one cares, no help or fate is interposed.
Heart goes from clay to stone, clay to stone,
never felt so alone.
Pick up a blade, knowing what's in store,
just can't take anymore.
Ram it through my heart of wood, and a curtain falls.
Gently sliding down my whole world's walls,
and along with it, despair it brings,
For I never even lived, for I was a puppet, on strings.
And, Who am I?
I'm drowning in a sea of faces,
desperately searching for traces,
of what, I've now long forgotten,
of something always lost, and re-begotten.
Surrounded by good friends, never felt so alone,
A wind sweeps the crowd and chills only me to the bone,
bringing to me the longing for the euphoria of dreams.
Invisible strings pulling me apart at the seams,
stuffing spilling out, never felt so exposed,
no one cares, no help or fate is interposed.
Heart goes from clay to stone, clay to stone,
never felt so alone.
Pick up a blade, knowing what's in store,
just can't take anymore.
Ram it through my heart of wood, and a curtain falls.
Gently sliding down my whole world's walls,
and along with it, despair it brings,
For I never even lived, for I was a puppet, on strings.
Please Login to post comments| On October 4th 2008 Poglu Said : | |
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deep m8...I can relate like hell to this one.... keep up the absolutely amazing work |
| On August 29th 2008 hawkstar Said : | |
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Absolutely amazing! |
| On June 17th 2008 CharTheKnight Said : | |
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I love how it twists and the format is beautiful! Very well done! :D |
| On February 21st 2008 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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i agree with everyone else..this is amazing! |
| On November 30th 2007 stics917 Said : | |
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wow man interesting structure i like |
| On October 20th 2007 ha7 Said : | |
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That was beautiful and true for all, whether now or at one time in their lives! I loved it! |
| On October 17th 2007 JWalker2406 Said : | |
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Like the ones before me AMAZING :D |
| On July 31st 2007 Xpoetxgurlx Said : | |
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this is absolutly amazing! i love it!! |
| On July 9th 2007 cornnutsrcool Said : | |
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wow, that is an AMAZING poem, i have no words to explain how great i think that is. just wonderful. |
