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Growing Cold
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Created on 7-9-07
It is my turn to fall,
for though I have given all,
it is not enough.
I huff and I puff,
trying to climb this wonderous hill,
and near the top take a horrible spill.
I screwed up, made a mess,
wish I hadn't but have nonetheless.
You'll go on without me, so I'm told,
but I wish you'd come back, I'm oh so cold,
your memory darkens,
to another, your love hearkens.
"Come back!" I yell, sounding very bold,
then quietly, I say, "Please, I'm growing cold..."
for though I have given all,
it is not enough.
I huff and I puff,
trying to climb this wonderous hill,
and near the top take a horrible spill.
I screwed up, made a mess,
wish I hadn't but have nonetheless.
You'll go on without me, so I'm told,
but I wish you'd come back, I'm oh so cold,
your memory darkens,
to another, your love hearkens.
"Come back!" I yell, sounding very bold,
then quietly, I say, "Please, I'm growing cold..."
Please Login to post comments| On February 21st 2008 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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i love the last two lines! great poem : P |
| On October 17th 2007 JWalker2406 Said : | |
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Aw...so sad :( really good poem though, think this might be my fav.. |
