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This was one of my very first.

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Lovely Eyes

Views (147) Love Created on 7-9-07 Flag
When I look into your lovely eyes,
I am pulled towards a place beyond the skies,
the way before me a well-worn golden street,
which I have reached through a single feat.
I have given love,
and received love thereof.
Many others have walked this way,
and as I watch, some fall away,
into darkness, into despair,
I turn away shuddering to stare,
into your lovely eyes,
and am pulled closer towards that place beyond the skies.
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On October 4th 2008 Poglu Said :
Poglu amazing...can't think of anything else to say...keep it up =]
On September 22nd 2008 lovedaisy Said :
lovedaisy awwwwww
On February 21st 2008 HumanF17TH Said :
HumanF17TH awww this is cute
On December 22nd 2007 surefirefailur Said :
surefirefailur wow. early work huh? that just goes to show your naturally talented.
On December 20th 2007 ladyrosalyn007 Said :
ladyrosalyn007 beautiful