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Come, Take my Hand
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Created on 7-9-07
No more a scar,
Do I wish to Be,
But a Star,
Shining oh so Brightly,
Upon a Well-worn Golden Street,
Trodden 'neath many feet.
We fell off before,
And my Heart to pieces it tore.
But I am empty now of Tears,
No Longer devoid of Fears,
Cautiously now, we shall go again...
Come, Take My Hand.
Please Login to post comments| On August 29th 2008 hawkstar Said : | |
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Very nice poem, I like it! |
| On March 13th 2008 gvegas1323 Said : | |
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do you wear silk t-shirts |
| On February 21st 2008 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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love it! |
| On November 21st 2007 surefirefailur Said : | |
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holy crap, do you have talent! it's amazing all the emotions you can evoke in only 12 lines |
| On October 17th 2007 JWalker2406 Said : | |
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Really like this! :D |
