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Only to explain my past with 'guys'.Rate this Poem
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The Man Of My Dreams |
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What Love Is To Me |
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You Took My Life |
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Death Did Us Part |
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For All of You |
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Memories |
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Proven Theory |
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Untitled |
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Hell of a Broken Heart |
Proven Theory
Every guy in my past has done me wrong
So I'm afraid when another comes along.
I see a bright sign posted with "caution".
Still my heart always seems to be auctioned.
I stumble over myself to fall for every new one.
Then the gaming starts, but I never find it fun.
Twisting and turning, hearts dizzy from the latter.
Emotions head over heels but not mind over matter.
Possible humiliation, impossible is the winning.
My heart gets broken from the very begininning.
Why do I keep giving my all when I know the end?
Why do I believe when I know it's all just pretend?
Because until this moment I always held hope high.
Hope for honesty, respect, and to simply make it by.
I don't know where I stand, I've suddenly lost my place.
I slowed and hastened the pace and still lost the race.
So I'm packing up and leaving with the rest of my pride.
I won't let you get to me anymore; access now denied.
Goodbye and good riddance to you and your tricks.
Before I give you my trust again, I'm out of here quick.
| On August 7th 2008 deadpoet Said : | |
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I read this on myspace, it was really good, hun |
| On June 25th 2008 Kidojidoari Said : | |
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I really like how the rhythm of the poem is really lively but the subject is so morose and final... And the play on words and phrases was really awesome.
I love it!! |
| On June 12th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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yep yep yep this is the way I am right now. I can't find that someone. I'm still young, but I keep thinking that it'll be too late once I'm older. *sighs* Anyway, nice job on this. It's great. |
| On June 9th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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excellent poem, definitely understand the feeling of being done wrong, and trying to start over. It really makes it hard to trust anyone anymore, nicely done!! |
| On June 9th 2008 lisaljb Said : | |
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I hope you find the right one if you haven't already, you deserve the right one! Fantastic poem, I love how quick and smooth it went and captured my focus! |
| On June 9th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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hmmmmm it is unfortunate when u have ur heart on display for the u hope has the power to nurture it and they instead smash it. i love this hun. great job. |


