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Death Did Us Part
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Created on 12-10-07
We would've vowed "Until Death Do Us Part"
But is death of only body, mind, soul, or heart?
When you proposed, I had my doubts.
But I just knew we'd 'work things out'.
And you drug in that trash- I still don't know why.
Trying to figure it out caused the death of my mind.
Searching for answers I hid all of my pain.
Burning rage, shattered hopes, I went insane.
You told her lies about me-the death of my heart.
I couldn't forgive you so now we're apart.
Alone all over again- I am no longer whole.
Therein lies the death of my soul.
Still breathing, but dead in every other way.
Death did us part- the price I'm forced to pay.
Please Login to post comments| On January 7th 2008 NisaNicole Said : | |
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Another deep poem..."But is death of only body, mind, soul, or heart?" favorite line :D |
| On December 30th 2007 xFadedxVanityx Said : | |
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That's really good. im jealous! lol |
| On December 27th 2007 lisaljb Said : | |
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Rather sad with a lot of emotion, I do hope you find the one! |
| On December 18th 2007 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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I liked it, very emotional, |
