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Written for a man I thought I loved once

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Created: 12/10 2007
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Category: Pain

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Death Did Us Part

We would've vowed "Until Death Do Us Part"

But is death of only body, mind, soul, or heart?

When you proposed, I had my doubts.

But I just knew we'd 'work things out'.

And you drug in that trash- I still don't know why.

Trying to figure it out caused the death of my mind.

Searching for answers I hid all of my pain.

Burning rage, shattered hopes, I went insane.

You told her lies about me-the death of my heart.

I couldn't forgive you so now we're apart.

Alone all over again- I am no longer whole.

Therein lies the death of my soul.

Still breathing, but dead in every other way.

Death did us part- the price I'm forced to pay.

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On November 4th 2008 1w1ldh3art4u Said: 
1w1ldh3art4u This one was hard for me to read in my current state of mind. But I can understand where you are coming from in this.
On January 7th 2008 NisaNicole Said: 
NisaNicole Another deep poem..."But is death of only body, mind, soul, or heart?" favorite line :D
On December 30th 2007 xFadedxVanityx Said: 
xFadedxVanityx That's really good. im jealous! lol
On December 27th 2007 lisaljb Said: 
lisaljb Rather sad with a lot of emotion, I do hope you find the one!
On December 18th 2007 gonzo4201 Said: 
gonzo4201 I liked it, very emotional,