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1 Sam killed me, the other revived meRate this Poem
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Created:
10/11 2007
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374
Category:
Pain
My Poems
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What Love Is To Me |
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You Took My Life |
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Hell of a Broken Heart |
You Took My Life
Lonely, hurt, abandoned abused.
Angry, sad, lied to, and used.
You lied and cheated and then you left.
Hopeless, weak, pitiful, bereft.
Lost, afraid, confused, and numb.
Belittled, Scalded, Naiive, and dumb.
You took all I gave and then some more.
You took my life-left me dead on my floor.
Please Login to post comments| On November 4th 2008 1w1ldh3art4u Said: |
| I like how it flowed and you just mainly used adjectives throughout the whole poem. I really enjoyed this even though it was sad in subject. |
| On June 9th 2008 gonzo4201 Said: |
| Damn.... so intense |
| On May 14th 2008 jgbear52 Said: |
| This is a really good poem.. I mean it. its awsome.. |
| On January 7th 2008 NisaNicole Said: |
| I agree with everyone else...very deep. But also very good :D |
| On December 18th 2007 JuJu122093 Said: |
| WOW! thats deep |
| On December 8th 2007 101091 Said: |
| Sad, deep, and yet beautifully written. |
| On October 19th 2007 tyiqoqibfiobao Said: |
| life sucks |
| On October 13th 2007 morbidangel585 Said: |
| short but really good. |
| On October 13th 2007 2xoxashleyxox2 Said: |
| Aww its sad but cute =D |
| On October 13th 2007 lisaljb Said: |
| Oh wow this is a great poem, short and simple! well done! |
