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The Man Of My Dreams
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Created on 10-11-07
I see the love for me- it is showing in your eyes,
I feel this fire deep within me burning me inside.
I hear my heartbeat, seeming to echo all around.
I hear our breathing intensify and not another sound.
You pull me close and my heart just stops beating.
I feel your breath on my lips to find that I'm not breathing.
One hand caressing my back and the other in my hair.
Kissing me lightly-then deeper as we become more aware.
I feel your whole back side tense up underneath my hands.
The pride inside me swelling up to know that you're my man.
Flames of the fire inside me suddenly burn lower and higher.
The sense of being in love with you is burning me with desire.
Feeling your hand slip up under my shirt onto my bare skin,
Lifting your shirt off you, I feel everything explode within.
Reaching for you, softly roaming your body with my fingers,
Coming to the waisteband of your pants, stopping to linger.
Removing my hand from your zipper, you pull me to the bed.
Sitting me down, you kiss me and lift my shirt over my head.
Before me, I see the most beatiful man with the key to my heart.
Releasing me only long enough to undo my bra with skilled art.
Standing, I look back into your eyes to whisper that I love you.
You return the statement and there is no doubt at all that it's true.
Coming slightly back to my senses, I notice your pants are gone.
Entirely speechless at the sight of you before me with no clothing on.
Sitting down I reach out for you to pull you down to bed with me.
But suddenly you've vanished, my darkened bedroom is all I see.
I call your name only to hear slience, and look to see only black.
I wake up to realize it was all a dream, wishing I could go back.
For the third time this week, I've awakened from this world so new.
Each time coming to the realization that I want to fall in love with you.
Please Login to post comments| On June 25th 2008 FireAngel420 Said : | |
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I love it I love the way you start it all hot and sweaty and having your true love but the end really caught me off guard great job |
| On June 25th 2008 blueyedshababe Said : | |
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This brought a tear to my eye, I love it, love being the operative word here. |
| On June 25th 2008 Kidojidoari Said : | |
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I love it... it's so erotically emotional... which is a weird way to put it. xD
I wish I had those kind of dreams.. (but reality's good enough for me~)...
I loved it.
Good job with the rhyming and the flow of the scene.
Just lovely~ |
| On February 19th 2008 jeff2625 Said : | |
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Wow! I need a cold shower right now..great poem...you are a good writer.. |
| On January 21st 2008 teeniegirl015 Said : | |
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this is really awesome. was it supposed to be sad? |
| On January 17th 2008 Pikkakard Said : | |
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How sad. Love the way it's written |
| On January 13th 2008 joshmyers112 Said : | |
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Wow is all i can say. u really put alot into this. u have a true writers heart. |
| On January 9th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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Somebody throw me a towel. haha |
| On January 7th 2008 NisaNicole Said : | |
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Ah. I hate dreams that are a huge disappointment. Love this poem. [= |
| On December 8th 2007 101091 Said : | |
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Very well done. I love the last line. |
| On October 26th 2007 mydragonlord Said : | |
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well done it blends nicly enjoyed it. thank you
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| On October 19th 2007 tyiqoqibfiobao Said : | |
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sexy yet sad wierd combo |
| On October 13th 2007 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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oh wow i love how u put it together. those dreams are the best..then u wake up n theyre gone =[. great job |
| On October 13th 2007 2xoxashleyxox2 Said : | |
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Long but great love the way it rhymed |
