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I was very hurt when I wrote this.Rate this Poem
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Created on 1-8-07
Hurting
Pain
Confusion inside
Can't think
Cant cry
Can't figure out why
Have no hope
No feeling left
Why most you put me through this
I feel like I'm dying
You are so selfish
I can tell that you are lying
I can't live
Can't think
Can't breathe
You have to go
I need to be free
From all this hurt
This misery
You love me not
The saddness
The pain
You can make it all stop
So go away
Maybe in out next life we'll meet again
But for now
Let this be the end.
Please Login to post comments| On January 25th 2007 YaCountryBoy Said : | |
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very good ... |
| On January 22nd 2007 123kayla455746 Said : | |
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awwe i really like it.. and u asked for my opion soo here u go.. this is great and ur a very good writer.. keep it up.. i love it! |
| On January 22nd 2007 rainythoughts Said : | |
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awesome! |
| On January 13th 2007 xsweetcocainex Said : | |
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omg.so i used to write a lot of poems like this.This is amazing.But you have to stay strong and keep the faith.You may feel alone and like dying but never give up.THere is always someone there.Even if they are 50thousand miles away:] |
| On January 8th 2007 xXsportyXx Said : | |
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that was really good |
| On January 8th 2007 skyfirexlove Said : | |
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wow... that sounds a lot like some of the stuff I've written. |
| On January 8th 2007 crzytigger83 Said : | |
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omg i love it i can feel how you felt |
| On January 8th 2007 hollielewlove Said : | |
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i L...i LO...i LOV...i LOVE...i lOVE I...i LOVE IT! |
| On January 8th 2007 Ekahnicole Said : | |
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very good, especially to have been written in a painful time. |
| On January 8th 2007 RainbowGirl421 Said : | |
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I really like the symbolism and meaning in this poem. Very Nice. Have a magical day, Em Jay |
