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Created: 04/07 2009
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Category: Anger

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A Final Slit

Flesh that shimmers red to the seeing eye,

A smile shines while blood flows from her,

Elegance was never meant to be shown this way,

Yet now this is the only way.

 

She lets their stares develop her,

Feeling as though they'll eat her alive.

At least this way she'll dead for good.

Put to a peaceful sleep forever more.

 

Quiet little hums begin to start,

As the crowd feels a need to draw near.

Her smile remains as they whisper amongst themselves..

Wondering just when her pain will disease.

 

Forever then, Forever now?

Was that just a foolish saying we called out?

It surely seems that forever for me shall end right right now.

Forever once, Is all gone now.

 

I see them stare, let them stare.

Let them see the sick child embedded in me.

Let their foolishness be the death of them.

Let it all end right now.

 

Life seems to keep going for me,

Although I'm certain this pain will flood out eventually.

For now I'll wait,

And see just how fast I can get life fully out of me.

 

Their eyes are still staring, begging for more.

I feed their hunger for my pain with a final slit down.

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On June 20th 2009 FryTleRipdAprt Said: 
FryTleRipdAprt 10000000000 outta 5 ; amazingg
On April 7th 2009 angeesseule Said: 
angeesseule This poem is well presented, the dramatic approach gives it much style. - mucho bien trabajo. (very good job)
On April 7th 2009 bloodwraith1 Said: 
bloodwraith1 did you get my message? i said chill. i wasnt dissing you, or your poem. chill out. i was saying/meaning its kinda dark, like mine. but no two poems are alike. and idk why you have to take that the wrong way, i didnt say anything bad in the first place, so chill
On April 7th 2009 servantofall36 Said: 
servantofall36 Well done again, love. :)
On April 7th 2009 LittlKiraDemon Said: 
LittlKiraDemon How do you think that my poems are anything like yours? I've looked at 6 of your poems and found them to be nothing alike to mine. If you have any problem with my poems I can only see that it would be out of jealousy. I have 140 more subscribers than you and even your most rated poem doesn't have as many votes as my least rated. I have no problem with constructive criticism and actually support it but if its untrue and you're supporting your self while saying this untrue criticism I do have a problem.
On April 7th 2009 bloodwraith1 Said: 
bloodwraith1 ....meh, kinda like my poems
On April 7th 2009 xxxshylaxxx Said: 
xxxshylaxxx :( this is really good but really sad