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Created: 04/01 2009
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Category: Pain

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Hello Father

Hello Father

Stop and stare.

Stare at what I've become,

What I have done,

What you once loved.

But that girl's gone...

Her smile faded.

Her eyes drained.

To think its all because of you,

Because you weren't there,

Because you never cared,

To think that she once loved,

Once cared,

Once wanted you here.

But you left her there,

Left her to cry,

Left her to die.

And now you're back...

Back to care,

Back to help,

Back to love the girl you left.

But that girl's gone.

And all that remains,

Is the body of a girl who once had life.

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On April 27th 2009 Snicklefritz15 Said: 
Snicklefritz15 WoW!!! if only ppl knew what kinda of power they truly have over us..then maybe just maybe it wouldnt hurt so bad...yet at time we get so addicted to the pain,. it just becomes a way of life!
On April 1st 2009 boogiegirl45 Said: 
boogiegirl45 I feel the same way its really good
On April 1st 2009 xxxshylaxxx Said: 
xxxshylaxxx Great job i really like lines 8-12 im sorry Foodle but dont worry we can share my daddy :D
On April 1st 2009 servantofall36 Said: 
servantofall36 I understand this, love.
On April 1st 2009 transgenic Said: 
transgenic I love this.
On April 1st 2009 BrokenHeart32 Said: 
BrokenHeart32 I really loved it I know that feeling my dad left me as well your really good keep it up. :)
On April 1st 2009 BleedLaur1 Said: 
BleedLaur1 thats really good N i looked at our love is not romantic N i likes that 2