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Wrote when I was 17

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Can't Take This

Can't Take This

Views (108) Anger Created on 5-2-07 Flag

Can't Take This

Promises are said
Lies are fed
Blood is shed
Dripping to the floor
Can't take this anymore

 

 

 

 

-It is sad that I remember the young girl I was before all this :/ 

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On July 3rd 2007 bonita1510 Said :
bonita1510 ya i really like this its short but i really like this great job
On May 10th 2007 NightLifeGurl Said :
NightLifeGurl wow....i love it...shows true real angst =]
On May 8th 2007 paintshoppro Said :
paintshoppro awesome poem...:D
On May 6th 2007 LindaLisa Said :
LindaLisa I can tell you this Lindsey, it does go away. To the back of your mind and does not hurt the same later. Sometimes you will think back to the times and forget that was you that went through all that. You will see yourself then but not the person you are now. Life does not get easier but after you make it you know you can do it again.
On May 6th 2007 Lindseyk1989 Said :
Lindseyk1989 Wow teenage years are hard. I know it because I have been living them. They really are a nightmare =( ♥ me
On May 2nd 2007 Ax72 Said :
Ax72 the girl is not lost, never truly lost