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Created on 4-5-07
| Alone, sitting, watching the rain fall, I give my self away to the water, to the flames of the drops, forever. The darkness creeps in, my reality is shattered and I fall, I fall into the dark, into the deep, into an illusion. My fate has changed, my eyes can no longer see, yet, I give myself away. The rain hits me, yet, it slices through my body, for you see, I am no longer there. I am falling into the dark, my illision now becoming my reality, my eyes see, yet my body doesn't feel, and the rain keeps falling. |
Please Login to post comments| On April 11th 2007 sandevil Said : | |
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awesome , very good |
| On April 6th 2007 Paul4379 Said : | |
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it's fine (maybe even good), but why should I care besides to feel sorry for you |
| On April 6th 2007 sammytwotone Said : | |
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Pretty sweet |
| On April 5th 2007 onikboy Said : | |
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woah, gr8 poem |
