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Falling, Fell

Views (52) Love Created on 11-5-07 Flag

Falling Hard, Fallinf Fast

I am young, I am learning.

I don't want to be mourning.

The ground is near... I crash.

I am mourning

 

I love him, loved him

don't want to lose him.

He is evrything, anything,

Nothing.

He is gonoe.

 

He means the world to me

meant the world to me.

But nothing now.

I feel nothing, empty.

 

I am empty.

It is a strange thing.

Love.

It is young, old.

It learns, has learned.

 

Love is loving.

Loveis mourning.

It is full.

It is empty.

 

I am empty.

 

Am I love? or only a victim of it?

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On January 22nd 2008 giedinghagen90 Said :
giedinghagen90 really really good.
On November 5th 2007 Godslildancer Said :
Godslildancer i really like how you use past and present tense at the same time in this one.
On November 5th 2007 nick12477 Said :
nick12477 hey i like the poem...nice writing style, could use some work but all in all it is a great poem!