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The Journey That Counts
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Created on 6-9-07
Love is truely undefinable.. no matter how hard one tries.. it is the blissfully unattainable.. we seek it all our lives but don't look for it in ourselves until it's too late.. that's the first step for discovering what it truely is to love and be loved. It's a breif connection of eyes a you pass.. it's the absolute silence in you mind when you feel truely happ, it's that surging of emotion that is a mixture of emphatuation, concern, and belief... all flowing at once for that person who fills your sou with questions and interest... love is a journey that doesn't have an end... love is the freedom of the spirit to find what makes it feel whole... love is falling short of expectations.. breaking promises.. slipping up, and still trying as hard as you can to be happy and cause happiness... Love is the faith we have in ourselves and in others... it's having the courage to trust someone and know that the destination maters as little as who you find love with. Love is Living life.
Please Login to post comments| On January 6th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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Indeed, this is a fine piece of work! I loved it! |
| On November 3rd 2007 joppysgirl Said : | |
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this is really good. |
| On October 23rd 2007 jocelynn956 Said : | |
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wow i really like this one |
| On September 5th 2007 pink23fairie Said : | |
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Wow very sweet! |
| On September 2nd 2007 psychomama28 Said : | |
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this is you at your best. please write more ♥ |
| On August 10th 2007 Chelle57 Said : | |
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Awwe, Sweetness this is so pretty!! I find it better than what I write : / |
| On July 23rd 2007 Chandapanda08 Said : | |
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That is awesome i love it! |
| On July 21st 2007 thecolorblack Said : | |
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:) |
| On July 19th 2007 Jeremy062902 Said : | |
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OK, I have fallen all up in some love with this one. This is worthy of publishing! Mindblowing! It is an insightful look at an eternal question portrayed by the wisdom of truth. You have got to post more of your work!!! |
| On July 19th 2007 imabeauty Said : | |
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omg.. i love it! that's awesome. |
| On July 14th 2007 autrydennis Said : | |
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thats awesome , you should write more , i would enjoy reading them , take a look at my stuff and tell me what you think ok , and plz keep writing , have a great weekend and god bless |
| On July 4th 2007 crazkoala Said : | |
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wow. that is amazing. shivers. =D beautiful! |
| On July 1st 2007 bonita1510 Said : | |
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wow this is really good i really like this poem u should really check mine out sumtime |
| On June 22nd 2007 marie1994 Said : | |
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love it. thats really good. read some of my work u might lik it |
| On June 13th 2007 aajjvv Said : | |
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nice |
| On June 12th 2007 christopher199 Said : | |
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very good love poem |
| On June 11th 2007 FamousOne777 Said : | |
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Skills that kills lol Good Job babe |
| On June 11th 2007 Trippaholic Said : | |
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this is really good for your 1st poem :)...i love it. keep up the great work |
| On June 10th 2007 hackerlord Said : | |
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Very Great work you did here.. keep it up and keep it coming sweetie |
| On June 10th 2007 iluvremuslupin Said : | |
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Thats REALLY good! Please see my 1st story! |
| On June 9th 2007 Yanks19 Said : | |
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your first poem is a hit! |
| On June 9th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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Nice work. I'm guessing you fell in love recently huh? hehe. |
| On June 9th 2007 leeshaforeverr Said : | |
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i love it |
