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Dance with my Father

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the music plays

im in my dress

i look around

i see them dance

but im alone

there in my dress

no one to hold

no one to dance

im 15 now

the music plays

i look around

we start to dance

my mother comes

she cries a tear

but you're not there

with me to dance

the years have passed

the music plays

my dress is torn

you're far away

i see them dance

but im alone

cuz you're not here

for me to hold

 

 

i really hate father/daughter dances because of this. lol ha ha but yea...i had to let this out and after 11 years of not havin him around, it still hurts...=]

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On March 11th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll Aww~ I'm sorry sweetie~ *hugs* to you. This is a beautiful poem.
On March 11th 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s oo n bein 15 in my family is a BIG DEAL. thats when us girls r considered women. i was supposed to have a father/daughter dance but i had to dance with my mom. i was like broken that day. it was beautiful but him not bein there was not cool..so yea, jus in case u didnt get the bein 15 thing.=]