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Flowers are like people

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Created on 7-13-06

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Flowers grow and one day shrink
Some are yellow some are pink
They get stepped on,trampled,fall to the ground.
It also happens to people just look around

Some are pretty some are not
Ugly ones get hurt alot
They come in groups of more than two
its not only them, its people too.

Some have four pedals some have none
too bad for flowers they cant run
They live life through, they have no choice
some people in life dont use their voice.

Kris Lee Brand

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On February 16th 2008 tarz3189 Said :

	I wrote a blog on myspace just like this - it was called 'Seed to a flower' About how humans are just like flowers. I wrote how humans are like flowers, sometimes we feel small and pathetic, much like a seed, but if we focus on the positives instead of the negatives through the rough patches we will stem and grow. I like your poem, well done. It made me smile :) so thanku.

On July 9th 2007 AstralLoser Said :

	Really good poem! It has a great flow to it, reminds me of Dr. Seuss.

On May 9th 2007 doompixie87 Said :

	Lovely. i like that you have used such a simple reference. flowers are beautiful just like people nice poem love pixie xxx

On March 29th 2007 Johnfisher2 Said :

	Okay, this is good, but I think you should have invested more time into it before you posted it. I think it's very important that you first learn how to use commas, ex (Some are pretty, some are not) With the comma there is a pause and thus more dramatic. Two, I would say no one on this entire site knows what meter is, you write whatever you want as long as it rhymes at the end, and like others had said, don't worry so much about rhymeing, you sacrifice so much literary merit that your poem because childish. Read some good poetry by some great poets sometime, read some E.E Cummings, or Plath even, they both have meter, they flow, they have natural rhythm, your's doesn't. Keep writing. -Fish-

On February 26th 2007 alex192 Said :

	I agree fully with kiwikiwi. They're not worth it. And I understand that Testriffic won't let you go back and correct grammatical errors. It bothers me. >.

On January 28th 2007 loverkristen Said :

	very nice. i like alot

On January 26th 2007 mikiangel Said :

	i love it!!!!

On January 24th 2007 ducktapecrazy8 Said :

	great flow, awesome message, an overall great poem!!!! incredible!!!

On January 24th 2007 yukigassen01 Said :

	Totally True! Loved it.

On January 17th 2007 kiwikiwi Said :

	dont waste your time replying to people who dont like your work. they dont care what you say, and if they dont like it, they should just leave. there's a little red box in the corner that gets rid of all their worries. so dont get worked up about what they say, if it upsets you, just blow it off and go read some positive comments. its a good poem, and i like it a lot. it's well done and thoughtful. and to other people who dont like this, go write your own poem and leave other people alone.

On January 2nd 2007 KrunKris09 Said :

	i got a poem of mine published in a book and i bought it for about 30 or 40 so dollars... but that poem isnt on this website

On December 30th 2006 mamawolf16 Said :

	Wow, I think I'd go through and delete a few of these VERY RUDE people....I agree that leet speak or whatever it's called is rude and stupid for normal people, but I think in your writing, you did a good job...Oh, and poetry.com is a rip off I went through and you don't get any prizes unless you travel to their place and buy their books. (which by the way are VERY expensive) I think you have a good poem. Keep writing... As for some of you others...I don't see why you have to be so hateful.....must be that you didn't try to write or just aren't sure of anything in your lives and have to lash out....hhhhmmmmmm......

On December 26th 2006 HollyWood0205 Said :

	i like that you have choosen to write a poem about lifes ups and down it is a very true poem good job!

On December 20th 2006 LySsAjAnElL Said :

	i love it. It is so true.

On December 14th 2006 timinley Said :

	I really liked it

On December 9th 2006 jeffdaman Said :

	i love it can i use it on myspace? it was beautiful

On December 1st 2006 Teiyonna Said :

	100% true

On November 30th 2006 funky7573one Said :

	AMAZING!!!!!!!!!! Love it! It's a great simile as the title and the expansion all the way through is incredible with awesome flow and everything. Keep writing! :D

On November 29th 2006 mystiquell Said :

	Think the poem has potential but I do have to agree with some of the others sorry. Yes, writing does give you creative licence and what-not but in order to create a flow you do need to have some grammatical 'correctness'. When you read something that is poorly spelt or punctuated, you automatically focus your attention on these (and inevitably look for more) instead of the actual poem and its meaning. Practice makes perfect and remember, you can be creative - even change they spelling of words if you like - without ruining the flow of the poem. Dont mean to sound judgemental, just wanted to throw in my oppinion and a few pointers.

On November 28th 2006 nosmartgirl5 Said :

	Awesome poem.I havent heard much original peices like this in for ever.Its very nice and I enjoyed it in a short amount of time^^ please keep up your talent!!^-^

On November 27th 2006 KrunKris09 Said :

	I DONT KNOW....lol What is your problem...i dont use slang i just dont spenmd my life on the int. cuz i have life and i type fast and then i leave...i dont have TIME for a spell check...alrighty. and about the rhyming...use your imagination...God Bless You Kris

On November 27th 2006 LocaChulaOsita Said :

	What the fuck is this? Aw hell no! "Flowers grow and flowers shrink. Some are yellow some are pink" Lmao, lol. Dang must be the worst rhyming that I have ever heard. Lol, dang girl and I've seen your replies on these comments, too. "ive i wanted i could have mispelled every word on here and spell it the way it sounds...example...is so Cliche=iz soe clik" Hahaha lol, that is so retarded...are you retarded. and also when you say, "it gives you the write to write poems HOWEVER you wnat.." What the fuck is wnat? It's want mamma, and the first write should be right... kool is spelled with a c not a k in the beginning you say, "Ricochet......YOU NO NOTHING ABOUT POETRY..." apparently you don't know that much either, mamma. And it's spelled know not no...Before you reply to this comment, as I am sure that you will...how about typing it on Microsoft Word or something and click spell check...Bceause if you're going to use your little internet slang or whatever the fuck it is that your typing...Don't even try because I will treat you, a lot more maturely, better than you can treat me with your little internet slang.... Also internet slang is so overated and so it rhyming. Typ!n l!k3 d!$ @!nt du!n $hyt 4 yu m@mm@, !t 0nl! m@!x yu l00k !m@t!ur @n $l!ghtly r3t@rd3d...but yeah, check your spelling, grammar, punctuation especially before you comment

On November 25th 2006 mizzel212 Said :

	i luv it

On November 22nd 2006 meegan02010 Said :

	i know, there are alot of rude ppl on here. But your poem was awesome keep up the work! Great Job!

On November 22nd 2006 KrunKris09 Said :

	Thanx audyell82....=D

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