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Life IS |
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Neckties |
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pale |
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The Life Melody |
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Breakin Through (Song Lyrics) |
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It was love at first sight |
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Created on 12-31-69
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Please Login to post comments| On March 17th 2008 bigbabii Said : | |
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It is good, but your sentence structure is off for the type of poem you were trying to do. |
| On February 10th 2008 TopDogg92 Said : | |
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wow this iz pretty
good I wish I could
fell love like this someday |
| On November 22nd 2007 lukerulz Said : | |
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who da fuck r u talking about i really dont get fuckin poems they piss me off FUCKIN HELL |
| On November 18th 2007 bballstar70 Said : | |
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AWsumm=] love it |
| On November 7th 2007 Ryan9574 Said : | |
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okay then who is this too.........nah only jokin it was alright |
| On November 1st 2007 zyon21 Said : | |
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love this. it says it all!!!! |
| On November 1st 2007 zyon21 Said : | |
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love this. it says it all!!!! |
| On October 18th 2007 roxielox Said : | |
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that is 1 of the greatest love poems EVER!!!!! |
| On October 12th 2007 765433 Said : | |
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whoa this is a good poem |
| On October 6th 2007 katelynrose16 Said : | |
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this is a really nice poem... i really liked it... it reminded it of one of mine actually... check them out =]] |
| On September 24th 2007 fallenbloodxxx Said : | |
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this is one of the very few poems that i actually like that portray happiness..keep up the great poems! |
