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Fragments of Mind
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Created on 6-13-07
When you say,
Forever and ever,
Is it true?
Will it be there,
With everything through?
Or will I be,
Just a memory,
A fragment of mind?
Will you put me away,
For all of time?
Or am I something special?
A diamond,
In the rough.
Your one and only,
True love?
Please Login to post comments| On June 16th 2007 shallowspit1 Said : | |
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I too have seen that but...I too use some same phrases, I think this term is important to her and it tells us worlds about her. |
| On June 13th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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i loooove the rhymin ..... although,, hmmmm,,, u seem to use the diamond and rough thing again,,, i'm sure u used it for a different poem,, unless this also continues from the other?..... it's still nice,,,,, i like it just the way it is tho,, don't change it,, LOL |
