Created By
Author's Comments
My sister and I did this oneRate this Poem
Info
Created:
04/01 2008
Views:
284
Category:
Joy
My Poems
|
+
18
|
Listen |
|
+
23
|
A Beautiful Day |
|
+
9
|
In The End |
|
+
6
|
A Cry for Help |
A Beautiful Day
A Beautiful Day
Looking at the sky
They bright sun stinging my eyes
The bright beautiful sun
It wipes away the dark night
But lovely, I squint my eyes in the light
Sitting down, leaning against a tree
Staring at such a glorious sight
Wind breezing through my hair
Leave dancing in the wind
Breathing in the clean crisp air
Smiling to myself
Falling asleep beneath the warm sun
Wishing that everyday forever
Was as beautiful, as this one.
Please Login to post comments| On February 26th 2009 momsrule Said: |
| love this poem! :D |
| On September 15th 2008 lyrikaldisastr Said: |
| ..if u were using the sun as like symbolism expressing how everyday the simplest things go by unnoticed and how people take the simplest things for granted when in reality they could be like wonderful...then this poem's off the hook...if u were just describing a nice like spring day..then ur descriptions and everything were good...real good..leave dancing in the air shouldve been leaves tho...gotta give ya a complaint so this sounds real like im not just giving u a ganga compliments on ur poem:-p...but yea this was good..because of this tho...whatd be real gr8 from u is like taking ur skillz and abilities and applying it to describe something else..like deeper...this one's tight but i betcha if u did that it would be like timeless |
| On July 26th 2008 XrenaissanceX9 Said: |
| I could really feel this. It was nice. Very descriptive and beautiful. |
| On July 17th 2008 MZdaBoSs Said: |
| Like This Poem Its Really Is Quite Relaxing. Lol. |
| On June 21st 2008 justjetjustis Said: |
| i like it :) i wish that sun was here, im so cold :P |
| On June 17th 2008 gonzo4201 Said: |
| souch a happy poem, so much unlike mine, I like this |
| On June 7th 2008 Lookin4TruLuv Said: |
| My favorite line: "It wipes away the dark night". Beautiful new day, beautiful new beginning. I like this poem! |
| On June 7th 2008 browneyes33 Said: |
| Sounds wonderful. I love the sun too! |
| On April 1st 2008 Jermie6363 Said: |
| Yes it is a beautiful one |
