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the end of a dying relationship....Rate this Poem
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Goodbye
Goodbye, he said
It's over now
So I said, Goodbye
Ciao, he said
The feeling's aren't there anymore
So I said, Ciao
So long, he said
I'm a loner
so I said, So long
See ya, he said
I'm not worth your tears
So I said, See ya
It was fun, he said
while it lasted
So I sadi, Goodbye
Let's be friends, he said
We'll talk, ok?
So I said, FUCK YOU!
| On May 22nd 2007 chickenbroth Said : | |
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Angry, this is the shit!! |
| On May 21st 2007 dark013angel Said : | |
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i love the ending...very abrupt and unexpected...usually those kind of endings dont work...but on this one it does.. |
| On May 21st 2007 ybgrreject Said : | |
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wow...something happen i dont know about? |


