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the end of a dying relationship....

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Goodbye

Views (84) Anger Created on 5-21-07 Flag

Goodbye, he said

It's over now

So I said, Goodbye

 Ciao, he said

The feeling's aren't there anymore

So I said, Ciao

So long, he said

I'm a loner

so I said, So long

See ya, he said

I'm not worth your tears

So I said, See ya

It was fun, he said

while it lasted

So I sadi, Goodbye

Let's be friends, he said

We'll talk, ok?

So I said, FUCK YOU! 

 

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On May 22nd 2007 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth Angry, this is the shit!!
On May 21st 2007 dark013angel Said :
dark013angel i love the ending...very abrupt and unexpected...usually those kind of endings dont work...but on this one it does..
On May 21st 2007 ybgrreject Said :
ybgrreject wow...something happen i dont know about?