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Created on 5-20-07
The lonely tear
slips down my cheek
My face shows no emotion
but my knees are weak
I care for you deeply
Please, don't get me wrong
You have filled my heart with hope
and my soul with song
But my mind wanders here
and it drifts off to there
I yearn to be free
to go anywhere
I can't be tied down right now
I'm young and fancyfree
I need to have my space
to live and to be
slips down my cheek
My face shows no emotion
but my knees are weak
I care for you deeply
Please, don't get me wrong
You have filled my heart with hope
and my soul with song
But my mind wanders here
and it drifts off to there
I yearn to be free
to go anywhere
I can't be tied down right now
I'm young and fancyfree
I need to have my space
to live and to be
Please Login to post comments| On May 22nd 2007 chickenbroth Said : | |
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wow, very well done!! Great job!! |
| On May 21st 2007 ybgrreject Said : | |
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hmmm...curious as to who the young man is? lol |
| On May 20th 2007 deadpoet Said : | |
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10 years ago you were what, 16/17 right? i like this poem, funny thing is im almost 17 and found my love, i really dont care to be free right now, not like most 17 year olds. you've been writing a very long time, i see. |
