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written for a friend :]

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Views (56) Joy Created on 2-26-08 Flag

Life is full of ups and downs

Positives and negatives

That hit you to the ground

But there’s always something

To pick you up

A helping hand

For a brand new start

[Try again, try again, never give up :]

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On February 27th 2008 kosovohotty Said :
kosovohotty u can't pick it up if its die !!
On February 27th 2008 jetkills Said :
jetkills haha its awesome ^^
On February 27th 2008 jetkills Said :
jetkills for a friend ? hmmmm
On February 26th 2008 Khmerfriendz Said :
Khmerfriendz i liked this one alot too. the last line [to the poem] stands out to me. it sounds like it has a rhyme, but i cant find it!
On February 26th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth Short but a powerful message! I love it!