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Lifting the corner of my lips So I smile

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No Longer You

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It was just you

Lifting the corner of my lips

So I smiled

 

It was you feeling something

That I could never return

So I cried

 

It was you not understanding                        

Who I am and what I am

So I felt loath

 

It should end right here

 

No longer will it be you

To lift the corner of my lips

A frown it will be

 

No longer can I take it

The feelings that you give

I just want you to go

 

No longer shall I wait

For you to figure me out

So now I’m going to just

Walk away….

 

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On January 25th 2008 kosovohotty Said :
kosovohotty is that about me ?
On January 24th 2008 pecoros Said :
pecoros i like it...
I...well you know already =(
On January 24th 2008 saturn1992 Said :
saturn1992 very powerful words ^^
On January 23rd 2008 evildarkness13 Said :
evildarkness13 unusual but unique structure, but i like it, a lot nice job
On January 22nd 2008 blah2blah Said :
blah2blah love the structure of the poem. its very powerful. wonderful job!!!!
On January 21st 2008 jetkills Said :
jetkills awesome ^_^
On January 20th 2008 Vestque Said :
Vestque Wow! That was great, your Talented!
On January 20th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said :
ALIESAM21 wow...I like this one, just what I have been wanting to tell my x-bf! guys suk....but another will come along, that much I know!
On January 20th 2008 emily28793 Said :
emily28793 this is a great poem....