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Created on 12-25-07
She looks at the mirror
but she sees someone else
her best friend doesnt know
that she feels like a mouse
She goes to the bathroom
and looks at her face
her best friend beside her
not feeling her disgrace
she walks with her best friend
thinking of what to say
but the words wont come to her mouth
all of the things she wanted to say.
but she sees someone else
her best friend doesnt know
that she feels like a mouse
She goes to the bathroom
and looks at her face
her best friend beside her
not feeling her disgrace
she walks with her best friend
thinking of what to say
but the words wont come to her mouth
all of the things she wanted to say.
Please Login to post comments| On December 28th 2007 mistdarklight Said : | |
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the feeling is there... just unsure of wot feeling... confusion? if so, its well done that way. thumbs up |
| On December 25th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Good emotion, it really gets the bewilderment across..Great rhythm, too! |
