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Drugs and Alcohol
Best friends and backstabs
Smiles and fake laughs
New starts and break-ups
Crowded parties and late nights
All lead to depressed teens and suicide
Using drugs and alcohol
To calm the nervers
To feel relaxed
Drunken mistakes
In strangers arms
Unable to say goodnight
When the feelings are strong
Waking up miles from home
Feeling used and all alone
Facing this world is so much work
When your best friend betrays your trust
When you hide behind smiles and laugh it off
When your new relationship fall apart
When being around people just isn't enough
What could be better then drugs and alcohol
| On September 5th 2008 Vegas1515 Said : | |
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I like this poem . It goes well with my life . It's really really good !!!!
Keep it up !!!! |
| On July 11th 2008 jcompi1 Said : | |
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i can relate
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| On June 20th 2008 flawlesslove13 Said : | |
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totally has meaning. i love it. :] |
| On June 3rd 2008 CoolKat3 Said : | |
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i like chicken |
| On June 3rd 2008 babygurlj6 Said : | |
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really good! it reminds me of a friend that does drugs and drinks and is like sexually active and shes only 13! |
| On June 3rd 2008 gusty13 Said : | |
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this poem is really good |
| On June 2nd 2008 keegan4606 Said : | |
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been there.. and still am.. and the law sux cuz im waiting for my jail time for my fucked up depressed times that got way outta control! GREAT poem! |
| On June 1st 2008 Angel2k11 Said : | |
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what is better than drugs and alcohol?!...God in my opinion...lol but not everyone in this world will agree with me....but seriously...this poem is exactly how i felt when my ex-best friends betrayed me...i turned to things such as suicide...and sometimes i wished for something like what you are talking about in the poem...i loved this you deserve like SOO many rates for this poem!! awesome job!! |
| On June 1st 2008 piapie Said : | |
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whoa...love it |
| On June 1st 2008 Allison2492 Said : | |
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there's so much truth in that poem. really good. |
| On June 1st 2008 shorteternity Said : | |
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(lovely) |
| On June 1st 2008 ladytsundea Said : | |
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wow. thats poetry |
| On June 1st 2008 CoolKat3 Said : | |
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Nice! |
| On June 1st 2008 smile4evr Said : | |
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this is really good...i kno how that feels.........! kmp! |
| On June 1st 2008 lexiigurl345 Said : | |
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wowwz i freaking love it its just so amazing |
| On June 1st 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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Vicious cycle isn't it! Been there done that and glad to be off the rat wheel. :) |
| On June 1st 2008 offutt123 Said : | |
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i feel it
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| On June 1st 2008 happysneaks Said : | |
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oh my god. this is so good! like soooo good!! |


