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Paralyzed
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Created on 5-9-08
With dawn approaching, the nights fading.
I'll kiss you goodbye, as I choke down these tears.
I want you to know
Exactly how I feel.
Nerves get the best of me.
So I'll just hope you wont give up, you wont forget.
Forget about me.
I want to hear
You'll always be waiting.
I want to Know
You'll always love me.
Can't you read my mind?
How do I explain what I am feeling inside?
It's more then 3 little words.
It's more then I can control.
You kiss me for the last time and whisper "I love you".
You're walking away, but I can't move, can't breathe, can't think.
Paralyzed you have left me.
Please Login to post comments| On June 3rd 2008 Angel2k11 Said : | |
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what do you call it when you feel like you are completely frozen...and you are like bursting with emotion...and all that?!...OH GOSH...this poem is like FANTASTIC!! omg i loved it!!! |
| On May 27th 2008 offutt123 Said : | |
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i can feel the anxiety building as i read it. good poem |
| On May 9th 2008 smile4evr Said : | |
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i love it...thats all i can say! |
| On May 9th 2008 lillex64 Said : | |
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it makes so much sense! |
| On May 9th 2008 Allison2492 Said : | |
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I'm in love with it. =] |
