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Revenge Is Sweet
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Created on 5-3-08
Creeping up the stairs
She knows excatly where he sleeps
She keeps her breathing low even though her heart is racing-
Moving closer to his bed
Shes looking for another way
Guess she couldn’t find one
Cuz....
Oh God- oh God-
The cops are driving fast
His parents so confused
Oh- Why Oh- Why
They take her in
Into the room
They want to know
Oh- just to know
Shes looking for another way
guess she couldnt find one
Cuz..
Oh- God Oh- God
Shes sitting back, just relaxing
Shes Smiling into the two way mirror
They think shes crazy
They ask her why
Do you know what she said?
TELL ME DO YOU KNOW WHAT SHE SAID!
Oh she said..
She said..
Revenge is Sweet.
Please Login to post comments| On May 5th 2008 BreJroxURsox1 Said : | |
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hahah this is kind of funny. sorry if it's not supposed to be...but it's funny that HIS parents are wondering why she killed him and then she just says "Revenge is Sweet." it makes me kind of wonder what he did. Bravo! |
| On May 5th 2008 BreJroxURsox1 Said : | |
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hahah this is kind of funny. sorry if it's not supposed to be...but it's funny that her parents are wondering why she killed him and then she just says "Revenge is Sweet." it makes me kind of wonder what he did. Bravo! |
| On May 3rd 2008 Trouble2009 Said : | |
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LOVE U IT!! U HAVE SERIOUS POTIENTAL AS A WRITER . . .IT KEPT ME GOING TILL THE END . . . |
| On May 3rd 2008 flawlesslove13 Said : | |
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Love it :] i like your poems :] |
