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A Little More Each Day |
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Without Her Love |
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There's Always Next Time |
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Blood Stains Your Fate |
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Keep Me Safe |
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Safe To Say I'm Slipping Away |
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Revenge Is Sweet |
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Paralyzed |
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Don't Wait |
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I am Losing You |
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I am Sorry |
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Drugs and Alcohol |
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It's The Way |
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You Saved Me |
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Brand New Day |
Blood Stains Your Fate
You deceived me
Pretended like it was okay
How can it be
Your life a total lie
Your make-shift personality
Dont bother to explain
I could’t believe you if I tried
If I run will you chase me
If I hide will you find me
This lonely night now filled with so many cries
You laugh at their pain
Not noticing the blood that stains your fate
I’ve told you this before
Your presents horrifies me
You told me not to scream
As you tossed them aside
Wrap them in plastic bags
Just for looks you said
Make it all that more dramatic
If I run will you chase me
If I hide will you fine me
This lonely night now filled with so many cries
You laugh at their pain
Not noticing the boold that stains your fate
I could just leave and forget about this
I won’t tell a soul
Promise
If you were honest with yourself
I am sure you’d see
Why this totally terrifies me
How can you say not to worry
I am shaking in fear
As you humm to the stars
I am drowning in despair
I can’t, I won’t
This is the end
I am done with this massacre
If I run will you chase me
If I hide will you find me
This lonely night now filled with so many cries
You laugh at their pain
Not noticing the blood that stains your fate
I am disgusted
You’re in denial
This simple game turned into a blood shed
Do you know who’s right
In this mess of lies
I am tangled in fear
Lost behind your troubled mind
| On July 21st 2008 offutt123 Said : | |
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good deep stuff I can only imagine what inspired this. some constructive criticism for you. check your spellings and proof read, puncuation isn't that big of a deal to me cause I write in lines I guess, but sometimes a miss spelled word has a different meaning, and your have too much talent to let simple things like that cloud your work, Love your stuff :) |
| On June 20th 2008 flawlesslove13 Said : | |
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you seriously have a talent. i honestly think that this is the best one out of all of them. |
| On June 3rd 2008 Angel2k11 Said : | |
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woh....i had goose bumps reading this.....woh....gosh....i was afraid of that person...i wanted them to die!! wow ...your amazing...!!! |
| On June 1st 2008 XxpreppyemoxX Said : | |
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i love it |
| On May 29th 2008 gusty13 Said : | |
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really great |
| On May 3rd 2008 Trouble2009 Said : | |
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WOW . . .THIS IA AMAZING . .I REALLY LIKE THIS ONE! |


