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A Little More Each Day |
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Without Her Love |
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There's Always Next Time |
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Blood Stains Your Fate |
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Keep Me Safe |
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Safe To Say I'm Slipping Away |
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Revenge Is Sweet |
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Paralyzed |
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Don't Wait |
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I am Losing You |
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I am Sorry |
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Drugs and Alcohol |
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It's The Way |
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You Saved Me |
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Brand New Day |
Without Her Love
Shadows dance across her mind, making images that remind her of that night.
So frightening it is to recall, a tragedy spilled upon the floor.
Lost between lust and love, doors close one by one.
Do you hear her cry out for the one she lost?
A tragic fate he couln't overcome.
How much sorrow fills little hearts.
She hides her pain beneath wristbands, going deeper with each passing day.
Tearing through her flesh this void in her chest, where her heart use to beat.
Now she carry's it in a plastic bag, carefull not to stain the carpet red.
What a mess she has become.
She wonders if she's at fault.
Did she bring this upon herself?
Should she not have let her guard down?
Is it really better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all?
Theses question with no awswers haunt her waking hours.
So she'll wait for the day she can see this world fade away, and feel the touch of
her love, the love she never really lost.
| On July 30th 2008 JustifyMisery Said : | |
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this was a relllllly good pice mahahaha |
| On May 9th 2008 shorteternity Said : | |
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this almost made me cry its so good. |
| On May 3rd 2008 Trouble2009 Said : | |
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OMG!! THIS IS MY FAVORITE!! IS BEAUITFUL AND LIKE THE OTHER PERSON SAID . . .U CAN FEEL THE EMOTION SEEPING FROM THE PAGE . . .BEATUIFUL . . . |
| On May 1st 2008 brittnee86 Said : | |
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The feeling in the poem is powerful. It's strong, and does not rely on a rhyming scheme... just rhythme and great word choice. :)
check out some of my poetry, I'd really appreciate some feedback from a great writer. :) |


