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Why didn't you listen

Views (61) Tragedy Created on 4-8-08 Flag

Why were miles in between us

When you were the one i needed to save?

Why does every single sad tale

End upon a grave?

I gave you my prayer

But why didn't you listen?

I told you life was beautiful

But why didn't you see it glisten?

We were friends you and I

Why did you sometimes doubt  so?

Was it because miles seperated us

Was it hard to think how far friendship goes?

I now know all i did not

Couldn't you see life was short?

Instead of leaving soo soon

Couldn't you held out longer like a sport?

All i can do now is wonder

Why did you go wasn't our friendship true?

I guess i couldn't convince you enough

Why don't you listen this time, I will forever miss you.

I will love you no matter what, distance did not change that. We were good friends and i did truly care, but sadly you thought that i was just saying that. I was telling the truth though, that life is grand, if only you listened.

RIP. NICK-MY ONLINE BUD

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On April 8th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x wow this sad... nice job though
On April 8th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth I am so sorry for your loss. May he rest in peace!
On April 8th 2008 miroku0009 Said :
miroku0009 very sad and tragic... you wrote it well though and could feel the emotion.
On April 8th 2008 laurita2010 Said :
laurita2010 this is a good poem did this really happen in true life? well keep it up