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The end |
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My angel |
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A girls love |
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Arms wide open |
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Lost at sea |
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Life Haiku |
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Why didn't you listen
Why were miles in between us
When you were the one i needed to save?
Why does every single sad tale
End upon a grave?
I gave you my prayer
But why didn't you listen?
I told you life was beautiful
But why didn't you see it glisten?
We were friends you and I
Why did you sometimes doubt so?
Was it because miles seperated us
Was it hard to think how far friendship goes?
I now know all i did not
Couldn't you see life was short?
Instead of leaving soo soon
Couldn't you held out longer like a sport?
All i can do now is wonder
Why did you go wasn't our friendship true?
I guess i couldn't convince you enough
Why don't you listen this time, I will forever miss you.
I will love you no matter what, distance did not change that. We were good friends and i did truly care, but sadly you thought that i was just saying that. I was telling the truth though, that life is grand, if only you listened.
RIP. NICK-MY ONLINE BUD
| On April 8th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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wow this sad... nice job though |
| On April 8th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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I am so sorry for your loss. May he rest in peace! |
| On April 8th 2008 miroku0009 Said : | |
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very sad and tragic... you wrote it well though and could feel the emotion. |
| On April 8th 2008 laurita2010 Said : | |
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this is a good poem
did this really happen in true life?
well keep it up |


