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what i become |
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i wonder what whats it like |
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why god? |
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oh envious moon |
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Who am I? |
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Why the need for guns. |
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What am i running for? |
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You call yourself a friend? |
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bottled up emotion |
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Be what you are. |
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im gone |
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When I see you |
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A Sad Poem. |
A Sad Poem.
Her dad was a drunk
Her mom was an addict
Her parents kept her
Locked in an attic
Her only friend
was a little toy bear
It was old and worn out
And had patches of hair
She always talked to it
When no one's around
She lays there and hugs it
Not a peep of sound
Until her parents
unlock the door
Some more and more pain
She'll have to endore
A bruise on her leg
A scar on her face
Why would she be
In such a horrible place?
But she grabs her bear
And softly crys
She loves her parents
But they want her to die
She sits in the corner
Quiet but thinking,
"Please God, why is
My life always sinking? "
Such a bad life
For a sad little kid
She'd get beaten and beaten
For anything she did
Then one night
Her mom came home high
And the poor child was beaten
As hours went by
Then her mom suddenly
Grabbed for a blade
It was sharp and pointy
One that she made
She thrusted the blade
Right in her chest,
"You deserve to die
You worthless piece of sh*t!"
The mom walked out
Leaving the girl slowly dieing
She grabbed her bear
And again started crying
Police showed up
At the small little house
Then quickly barged in
Everything quiet as a mouse
One officer slowly
Opened a door
To find the little girl
Lieing dead on the floor
It must have been bad
To go through so much harm
But at least she died
With her best friend in her arms
A child dies every day from child abuse.
"Not my Work"
- Josh
| On April 4th 2008 shadyishott Said : | |
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i hate ppl like this its stupid how ppl want kids just to kill them.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! how can GOD let this happen? |
| On January 29th 2008 sweetie1294 Said : | |
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its sad what people do to kids
im only 13 and i say this with a hevey heart
people like that should not have kids and i have been through stuff like that i lost my cuzzen that way it sucked (rip mandie) that is her i love you mandie and miss u to |
| On December 31st 2007 sexyhoe01 Said : | |
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WOW THATS SOO SAD I CRIED
BUT ITS RELE GOOD... |
| On December 22nd 2007 nyalok Said : | |
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wow! |
| On October 30th 2007 mydragonlord Said : | |
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hell that was brutal, brilliant but butal, forgive me while i go sobb. |
| On October 7th 2007 necrosiss Said : | |
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whoever wrote this is truly amazing with words; it was breath-taking. Thanks for sharing. |
| On August 29th 2007 eatstickers22 Said : | |
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ohh ya i have read this on myspace... great poem |
| On August 23rd 2007 J3w3llC82890 Said : | |
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awww...
thats sad....
~*Jewell*~ |
| On July 24th 2007 chocohott Said : | |
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i was about to cry while i was reading this! its so sad! thanx for sharing this poem, even though u didnt write it, it was great. |
| On July 3rd 2007 joabizz Said : | |
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wow, really sad, and thank you for sharing it with us... I was hoping for her to escape somehow, but I guess the reality it it sometimes they don't...:( |
| On July 3rd 2007 nodaywithoutu Said : | |
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wow yeah thank's for sharing so deep and so sad cause it's true how can anyone abuse children if u don't want them put them up for adoption i mean it so sad and it makes me mad |
| On July 2nd 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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this is sad-thanks for sharing it! |


