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A Sad Poem. |
Who am I?
I am left here searching
I am searching for one reason,
A reason to wake up from this fantasy
I wanted to somehow feel like I belonged
I felt so unwanted and unneeded
Like a burden placed upon the earth that people were just going to have to deal with
For I wish i could end it but i cant
i felt that for some reason i need to stay
I will not cry to show any pain
I can not speak my mind when all my secrets aew so concealed beneath their judgment
All I feel are emotions building up in my heart
And that is why not one persosn understands how alone I really am
And no one can truly help me
i wanted people to see past my hidden shadows and bring me into Gods light
I can not understand why I was here on this earth
but I am compelled to be the same as others
Acting as if I was the same
Feeling as though everything was different
that possiby i was differnt
| On August 12th 2008 LovisaJoy Said : | |
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wow! this is great! i have on that is writen in a story format like this...if you wanna read it it's called Fallen Angel...i LOVE this one though...i don't think mine can beat it...ever! |
| On August 7th 2008 shirazmic Said : | |
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I truely like this one :)
Well done in writing it, its has feeling! |
| On January 25th 2008 listen147 Said : | |
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wow.deep.omg.=[.now i feel emo.good work. haha. |
| On January 5th 2008 bob72794356745 Said : | |
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i love you! |
| On October 11th 2007 heatherfulong Said : | |
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WHEN U R READING THIS DONT STOP OR SOMETHING BAD WILL HAPPEN MY NAME IS SUMMER I AM 15 YEARS OLD i have BLONDE HAIR , SCARS no NOSE OR EARS I AM DEAD IF U DONT COPY THIS JUS LIKE FROM THE RING COPY N POST THIS ON 5 MORE SITES OR I WILL APPEAR ONE CREEPY NIGHT WEN UR NOT ExPECTING IT BY YOUR BED WITH A NIFE AND KILL U THIS IS NO JOKE SUMMET ING GOOD WILL HAPPEN TO U IF YOU POST THIS ON 5 MORE FLASH BOXES |
| On July 24th 2007 chocohott Said : | |
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i kno exactly how u feel!! that poem was amazing! i feel that way all the time, and then i start to think about it and i can never get newhere with bcuz i have no idea why i was put here or whats gonna happen to me when i die, it makes me so lonely, like im the only one that worries about things like that, but now i realize that lots of people think about things like that. |
| On July 9th 2007 dancer22cheer Said : | |
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WHEN U R READING THIS DONT STOP OR SOMETHING BAD WILL HAPPEN MY NAME IS SUMMER I AM 15 YEARS OLD i have BLONDE HAIR , SCARS no NOSE OR EARS I AM DEAD IF U DONT COPY THIS JUS LIKE FROM THE RING COPY N POST THIS ON 5 MORE SITES OR I WILL APPEAR ONE CREEPY NIGHT WEN UR NOT ExPECTING IT BY YOUR BED WITH A NIFE AND KILL U THIS IS NO JOKE SUMMET ING GOOD WILL HAPPEN TO U IF YOU POST THIS ON 5 MORE FLASH BOXES |
| On July 3rd 2007 xkinkybuttonx Said : | |
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wow, i love poems, but wow thats really good! |
| On July 3rd 2007 nodaywithoutu Said : | |
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wow really really really really real......etc. good |
| On June 29th 2007 Bandgeek99 Said : | |
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i love it! |
| On June 27th 2007 blutess Said : | |
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i don't know what was up with the followin message but this WAS really good. |
| On May 26th 2007 xBrittanyxAnnx Said : | |
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WHEN U R READING THIS DONT STOP OR SOMETHING BAD WILL HAPPEN MY NAME IS SUMMER I AM 15 YEARS OLD i have BLONDE HAIR , SCARS no NOSE OR EARS I AM DEAD IF U DONT COPY THIS JUS LIKE FROM THE RING COPY N POST THIS ON 5 MORE SITES OR I WILL APPEAR ONE CREEPY NIGHT WEN UR NOT ExPECTING IT BY YOUR BED WITH A NIFE AND KILL U THIS IS NO JOKE SUMMET ING GOOD WILL HAPPEN TO U IF YOU POST THIS ON 5 MORE FLASH BOXES
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| On May 6th 2007 corkyj430 Said : | |
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This is a very good peom. I know how that feels. What is the point and why are we here? In therapy they tell me everyone has a perpose.....I dont know, but I really love your peom. |
| On April 2nd 2007 daywalker05 Said : | |
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everyone has a diffrent purpose for living YOU have to find it and you control what you feel and who you can trust noone can make you do anything |
| On March 1st 2007 ffyggftjr6567 Said : | |
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this is a really good poem!your a good poeit! |
| On January 25th 2007 tanyalee523 Said : | |
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even though the poem does not follow rules...the style makes it unique...love it and yes there is always times in this world that you wonder what am i doing here? what is my purpose? and it could take a 100 years to find out...or less but eventually we all know the reason...keep up the good work because I think I just found out what is your Purpose POET! |
| On January 20th 2007 shimmyshkdown Said : | |
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amazing. =] |
| On January 7th 2007 123kayla455746 Said : | |
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i feel ya.. |
| On December 21st 2006 Maecherie Said : | |
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I can also relate to this poem... Not knowing why you are here. But, sometimes you just got to let your mind rest, and just enjoy life =p~Ashley Mae~ |
| On November 19th 2006 lilchiquita Said : | |
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oo i love it send me a message sometiime |
| On October 27th 2006 Jush Said : | |
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awww thank yuo so much! |
| On October 26th 2006 Rai87 Said : | |
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Wow, its so beautiful. Story of my life, atleast there is someone else who knows how I feel....I can really connect to your poem....its really great! |


