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As I Lay.

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As I lay there in the grass                                                                          

Staring at the stars wondering how fast time had past

As I lay there warm in my bed

Dreaming of the thoughts  filled in my head

As I lay there beaten n broken

Thinking some words are better left unspoken

As I lay there in the crisp cool breeze

Listening to the laughter of children playing in the leaves 

As I lay there in the sun on a towel

Wondering what it'd be like if i were an owl 

As I lie here

As I lay there 

Dont waste your life away hibernating like a bear

 

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On April 6th 2008 mcrfan4life66 Said :
mcrfan4life66 this is really good! great job!! :]
On February 27th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said :
TheDragonwitch I like this I tend to like writing things with a twist at the end. Well done.
On January 25th 2008 listen147 Said :
listen147 haha. this one is nice. could use a better ending, but i love it.=]
On January 19th 2008 Spikecollecter Said :
Spikecollecter PRetty good =]
On October 30th 2007 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord nice twist i can place myself in some of thous plases. keep them coming.
On September 15th 2007 101091 Said :
101091 I love it. I wasn't expecting the end. Nice job.
On August 16th 2007 Jaester67 Said :
Jaester67 nice
On August 15th 2007 PoeticPang Said :
PoeticPang ^___^ nicely written,, good observings,,, great imagery!............. nice work~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang
On August 4th 2007 naughtysara23 Said :
naughtysara23 love it.
On August 3rd 2007 sabrina225 Said :
sabrina225 ohh i like this one
On August 2nd 2007 ShazzySharon Said :
ShazzySharon This one is good, and it makes me smile.