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I don't know where you went.

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Within These Walls

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Your eyes sparkle yet
but, it is different
than when we first met.
I don't know where you went.

I know where you're going,
you smile, say it's not your time
but they say it isn't slowing
still you deny, claiming you're fine.

Endless beeping
winding halls
stifled weeping
tortured calls.

The hands on the clock spin
days soon fade away.
This now seems a race to win
and somehow, you stay.

Hope begins its slow invasion
rising in my chest
with the rise of each sun
I put on a good face, my best.

Endless beeping
winding halls
stifled weeping
tortured calls.

The moon takes its hold
ruling among the stars
light is lost in the fold
the absence of day scars.

Your breaths are slow now
still you reassure, as if I'm in danger
with the lone hoots of an owl
you live your last, with a stranger.

Patients sleeping
bloody white walls
time still creeping
if only for a moment, silence falls.
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On March 9th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said :
TheDragonwitch This is incredible!
On March 6th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 wow i love this one well written :)
On March 5th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord WOW!! This was absolutly BRILLIANT!!!!
On March 4th 2008 RealFiction616 Said :
RealFiction616 Hands Down One of My Favorite Poems Ever....Good Work!!!
On March 4th 2008 RealFiction616 Said :
RealFiction616 Hands Down One of My Favorite Poems Ever....Good Work!!!
On March 4th 2008 Akinka Said :
Akinka W-O-W!!! I gotta say, u write awesome poems but this is my favorite so far!!! Amazing work...
On March 4th 2008 InvisibleFlame Said :
InvisibleFlame Truly superb!!!!!
On March 4th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic Holy shit, I love this! Wow, just amazing work...I don't know what else to say.