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moving on, not neccessarily up...Rate this Poem
My Poems
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Freshly Pressed Life |
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I'm not very fair am I? |
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Fight Night |
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Hurts Like Hell |
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Can't Sleep at Night |
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A Broken Heart |
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A Thousand Tiny Pieces |
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The Dust of the Earth |
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So Gone |
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What Kept me Alive |
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Just Don't |
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Greenbrier |
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A Certain Kind of Mystique |
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Home Sweet... |
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This Christmas |
Wake Up, It's Morning
A broken sigh now falls down my lips
it seems I've been here far too many years
I'm so afraid to take that next risk
not even night's calm breathe can ease my fears.
The stars take their time flying cross the sky
I'm begging, pleading, I'm not sure who
to strike this fear from my heart, where I lie
I hate this dearly, but what am I to do?
My very soul is shaking in its shoes
my insides are trembling
I cry tears of desperation, over an unseen bruise
is it better, when everything I know is dissembling?
The sun's just starting to break over the edge of the world
my thoughts must stop this strange whorl
I close my eyes until they are straightened, unfurled
it's time to loose myself in my life, the empty swirl.
| On February 21st 2008 Akinka Said : | |
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LOVE IT! The misery of having to wake up when morning finally gets you... simply, great! You are an amazing poet!!! You express feelings so well... |
| On February 20th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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love the word choice! Brilliant!! |
| On February 20th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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love the word choice! Brilliant!! |
| On February 19th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Beautifully written. Awesome word choice, I love it! |
| On February 19th 2008 hyper009 Said : | |
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poor amber, u need a hug...but i cant give u one...i know! ill pretend to hug u until u get here! |


