Jumpy1811

Everyone's trying to find their way.

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That Moment

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Created on 1-31-08

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I know things look bad
and you think you must be going mad
but, don't you dare freeze that moment.

Just take a step, keep moving
don't let it become such a powerful thing
move on from that moment.

Do not sit alone and figure
what would happen if you just pulled the trigger
escape from that moment.

That split second when you think you're alone
when you don't remember that I'm waiting for you to come home
do not be owned by that moment.

Because I need you here with me forever
suicide is not the answer, not ever
grab my hand, I'll pull you through that moment.

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On February 2nd 2008 krista32890 Said :

	I'm typing again because I want you to understand that I can't express enough how well you did this haha. Once again, fantastic talent.

On February 2nd 2008 krista32890 Said :

	Wow. This is really really good! It sounds like a song to me, like lyrics. 'That Moment'. I think the way you put the words together and ended with 'That Moment' was unbelievably smart. It all worked together. And the message was true. Loved it

On February 1st 2008 InvisibleFlame Said :

	This is so good...I can really relate...

On February 1st 2008 mydragonlord Said :

	This is SOOOO WOW!!! grate job just absoultly beautiful!!! Heres hopping that they "grabed your hand"

On January 31st 2008 teeniegirl015 Said :

	this is so good. I think repetition poems are a little harder to like, but I like this one. Great feeling and emotional coloring.

On January 31st 2008 unknownwolfie Said :

	WHOA! seriously wow ... amazin ... nd lik just wonderful great job!