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Created on 1-9-08
I can't stop my body thrashing
everything's going black, I'm crashing
no one is waiting to save me
because I wanted so to be free.
If I could've stopped all this
I would not have, far too selfish
if I had known the full price
I still would've fallen, and in the dark of night,
I could only have dreamed of you.
You may as well know the truth,
but know this as well
there is no such hell
as to be this faithless
only now can I confess.
everything's going black, I'm crashing
no one is waiting to save me
because I wanted so to be free.
If I could've stopped all this
I would not have, far too selfish
if I had known the full price
I still would've fallen, and in the dark of night,
I could only have dreamed of you.
You may as well know the truth,
but know this as well
there is no such hell
as to be this faithless
only now can I confess.
Please Login to post comments| On January 10th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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Grate emotion!!! |
| On January 10th 2008 ha7 Said : | |
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great poem i really liked how you described eveything you felt! |
| On January 9th 2008 hyper009 Said : | |
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i feel sad...is there nothing of the light of friendship? |
| On January 9th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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I agree with evildarkness. This is awesome! |
| On January 9th 2008 evildarkness13 Said : | |
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the poem itself is confusing, at least a little bit, but that is what makes it so beautiful, sorry if i seem kinda fruity, i really like poetry |
