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Created on 12-14-07
Oh this place, this place makes me hurt
Lights flash all around
But still, deceit and evil lurk
So come on, and let's burn down this town
If you could just place your hand in mine
The angels would sing for me alone
If we can only destroy this line
But a wary feeling crosses my bones,
Something tells me we won't make it outta here
It remains there, on the back of my neck
It whispers on, nagging in my ear
Clutches at my breath, inevitable as a shipwreck
I worry that you would sacrifice it all
But only time will tell
When it comes, both of us will fall
Because sacrifice? I would as well.
Lights flash all around
But still, deceit and evil lurk
So come on, and let's burn down this town
If you could just place your hand in mine
The angels would sing for me alone
If we can only destroy this line
But a wary feeling crosses my bones,
Something tells me we won't make it outta here
It remains there, on the back of my neck
It whispers on, nagging in my ear
Clutches at my breath, inevitable as a shipwreck
I worry that you would sacrifice it all
But only time will tell
When it comes, both of us will fall
Because sacrifice? I would as well.
Please Login to post comments| On January 4th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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Diferant but still good! |
| On December 20th 2007 hyper009 Said : | |
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there is something in this peom that makes me want to praise it (which i will) and yet i must ask if u need to tell me about something. |
| On December 17th 2007 ha7 Said : | |
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There is a lot of feeling in this, good job |
| On December 14th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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There's something about this that makes me love it! |
