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Suicide Story |
You're Fake
What has happened?
I don't understand
How I got in this situation
I bleed just below my hand
On my wrist you'll see a faded line
Call me emo
That's just a sign
That your heart is hollow
There's nothing inside
Just the blood that flows through you
Why did you start such an evil lie?
But that's just something you do
Maybe you can't see it
But I can, now
Your running my life with this shit
Take a bow
Congratulate yourself
Your plan has worked
I hate myself
You'll walk by with a smirk
On your face
But no one, but me
Can see
That sweetie, you're fake!
| On December 17th 2007 Atir09 Said : | |
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this is how im actually feeling right now, and the sweetie is my recent ex. I love this poem of them all, and i'll come back tomorrow to rate again |
| On November 28th 2007 katiejean1461 Said : | |
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that is really good |
| On November 27th 2007 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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Yeah I can relate to this, very wonderfully written. |


