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Suicide Story |
My Everyday Sport
Drowning in thoughts of suicide
That's my everyday sport
But you can save me from it
Because you believe I a doctor of some sort
Sometimes I feel like you're the only one
That can make me feel something other than pain
And other times I just want sit in the pouring rain
I think about suicide
Then I think about you
What would you do if I left you
So that suiciedal me stays in my head and off my wrists
| On November 4th 2007 Sandwich91 Said : | |
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aww... this is a good poet... in my opinion anyway, I know nothing of poetry and am a terrible poet myself ^^; Speaks from the heart, hope you feel better soon ^^ |
| On October 18th 2007 ILuvNeoma Said : | |
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Thats sad.... |
| On October 6th 2007 JenTheObscure Said : | |
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Nicely done, sad though. |
| On October 3rd 2007 nomorecryin Said : | |
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WOW goosie bumps all over my arms!!!!!
that great |


