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Created:
05/19 2007
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I Wish I Could |
I Do Care For You
I did what I Could
I did what I Should
I thought I was Right
But that was last night
Today has Been Long
But I Guess I was wrong
I Thought it was Real
So here is my Appeal
To tell you im sorry
So you will not worry
Its probably my fault
So dont even Halt
Just keep doing your thing
Dont even look back
The way i feel means nothing
compared to you staying on track
I Do care for you
I Do want whats best
Just keep being you
and ill deal with the rest
I did what I Should
I thought I was Right
But that was last night
Today has Been Long
But I Guess I was wrong
I Thought it was Real
So here is my Appeal
To tell you im sorry
So you will not worry
Its probably my fault
So dont even Halt
Just keep doing your thing
Dont even look back
The way i feel means nothing
compared to you staying on track
I Do care for you
I Do want whats best
Just keep being you
and ill deal with the rest
Please Login to post comments| On April 29th 2008 bbdolle Said: |
| awwww this is soo cute i love it alot!!1 your really good!!!!! oh by the way i'm Shannon |
| On February 10th 2008 PRiiSCiiLLA Said: |
| This is good |
| On January 5th 2008 princessb1988 Said: |
| fantastic poem |
| On November 13th 2007 lilpain0103 Said: |
| LOVE your poem. it's really good. :) |
| On June 28th 2007 cuteness66 Said: |
| its good i like it.. i hope you will come and read my poems.. k.. thanx |
| On May 30th 2007 DIXIEDEVILWEND Said: |
| LUV THE POEM. VERY SWEET, LUCKY GIRL:) |
| On May 20th 2007 Yagelgirl Said: |
| very good |
| On May 20th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said: |
| awww that's very sweet, good writing |
| On May 20th 2007 tswieberg Said: |
| This is an awesome poem...Nice job. |
| On May 20th 2007 CassieZ Said: |
| awww I love it... she's a lucky girl like I said earlier with another poem and ur a very good writer.. keep it up :)! |
| On May 19th 2007 BlkWingDragon Said: |
| Very thoughtful poem |
| On May 19th 2007 insanepixie86 Said: |
| I really like it. The poem has a good flow to it... |
| On May 19th 2007 dark013angel Said: |
| i love it...good job |
