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Created:
05/08 2007
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To Molly |
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The Haze is Thick
I Sit here Staring
At the Empty Screen
I Sit here Glaring
What does it mean?
The Haze is Thick
The Days are short
The Work is Sick
The Perks are Torqued
I Think I Might
I wish I Knew
Its worth the fight
To Be with you
The Game was Fun
The Game was Great
But now im done
and you probably hate
The Things ive Said
The Things ive Made
THe Day is Dead
But I got Payed :)
At the Empty Screen
I Sit here Glaring
What does it mean?
The Haze is Thick
The Days are short
The Work is Sick
The Perks are Torqued
I Think I Might
I wish I Knew
Its worth the fight
To Be with you
The Game was Fun
The Game was Great
But now im done
and you probably hate
The Things ive Said
The Things ive Made
THe Day is Dead
But I got Payed :)
Please Login to post comments| On June 25th 2007 fsadfjks Said: |
| ahahahaha. brilliant. |
| On June 17th 2007 ThisIsTheDay Said: |
| this is great. an very interesting-i guess you came out on top, huh? that's great..haha. -Lozer™[ loves this] |
| On June 15th 2007 PoeticPang Said: |
| "and you'd probably hate",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, LOL,,,, great poem,,, i like that u used the word,, uh,, "torqued"?... very strange,,,,,,, i like the optimistic ideal around it,,, and behind it the realistic foundation,, lol,,,,,,, very good,,,, sugoy!~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang |
| On May 19th 2007 dark013angel Said: |
| i like it...i agree with jac41190...interesting perspective... |
| On May 8th 2007 jac41190 Said: |
| its not remorseful at all...the speaker owns his actions, realizes that it might not have been the best, or the most ethical, but it was what "had" to be done, and he can accept that, bc of the superficial monotary reward...interesting perspective |
