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Created:
04/17 2007
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The Pain I Feel
Along with pain
Along without care
I feel like theres no gain
I feel like i cannot bear
All along this windy trail
these moments seem to never fade
it always seems like im gonna fail
Or put my arm to the blade
But then above i turn to look
And notice something in the Haze
i feel like my life is just a book
and all of this is just a faze
Along without care
I feel like theres no gain
I feel like i cannot bear
All along this windy trail
these moments seem to never fade
it always seems like im gonna fail
Or put my arm to the blade
But then above i turn to look
And notice something in the Haze
i feel like my life is just a book
and all of this is just a faze
Please Login to post comments| On March 3rd 2008 hurleygirl12 Said: |
| God it seems forever scince i read one of ur peoms i still love them ive wrote 3 new poems so ill post them later |
| On January 22nd 2008 kaykaypunk Said: |
| this is a kickass poem dude |
| On October 14th 2007 countrymana Said: |
| your poems are really good :) |
| On September 16th 2007 ilovesouthlyon Said: |
| short but i love it |
| On August 17th 2007 JaKe10101 Said: |
| sounds like me |
| On July 26th 2007 BahaBubbleGum Said: |
| Love this |
| On July 26th 2007 BahaBubbleGum Said: |
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| Love this |
| On June 5th 2007 Bethiebethbeth Said: |
| Awww! Hugs Johnny. |
| On May 31st 2007 LoveAbagail Said: |
| wow, i love it. your really good. |
| On May 9th 2007 dreamlesleep Said: |
| i love this! |
| On May 4th 2007 darediva551 Said: |
| that was extremely awesome i luved it !!! :) |
| On May 3rd 2007 ThisIsTheDay Said: |
| better than what i can do... |
| On May 3rd 2007 xxolaura021oxx Said: |
| good job |
| On May 1st 2007 babyblue187954 Said: |
| I like this.. Its really good. |
| On May 1st 2007 Spikecollecter Said: |
| Quit being a better poet then me already! Lol I Love it johnny |
| On April 28th 2007 lynnshelby Said: |
| thats good |
| On April 28th 2007 AndieChaosTM Said: |
| That's really good. I love it =] |
| On April 25th 2007 pink23fairie Said: |
| wow that's awesome *thumbs up* |
| On April 25th 2007 lestatinator Said: |
| oooo, dude, ur rhyming kicks ass, and damn it, so does this poem. |
| On April 25th 2007 ilovepellie Said: |
| wow, interesting poem....I like it. |
| On April 25th 2007 yerdinodotcom Said: |
| magnificent! |
| On April 25th 2007 sexybeast6655 Said: |
| wow! i can really relate! |
| On April 24th 2007 lildevil357 Said: |
| Nice! |
| On April 23rd 2007 spasm01 Said: |
| i like it very much. but could you can go and take a gander at my one time or another? thanks much |
| On April 23rd 2007 mrskritter Said: |
| great job |
