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I was in the mood durring biology.....Rate this Poem
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Crying. (One line poem) |
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Created on 4-16-07
The pain is too much to handle.
(You better watch out.)
It is building up inside.
(You better watch out.)
It is near an explosion.
(You better watch out.)
A few days later your family is crying.
(You didnt watch out...)
Please Login to post comments| On July 16th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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damn,,, what is with u??????... seriously,,, just kill them and get it over with,, but then of course,, i shouldn't really say that,, ,,,, u are starting to sound like one of those kiddie-skool-killing spreeers,,,, not good,,, *poke*,,, tho this poem is suspenseful and the repitition is great,, this poem is a terrible sign of a terrible future situation,,, ~_~.....~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang |
| On July 11th 2007 fgggfx Said : | |
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the beginning kinda reminded me of a evanescense song |
| On July 6th 2007 Twincult Said : | |
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very good. i like biology class. i got an A in it. it was honors class. it was nothing really special. first year teacher. he didnt know what he was doing. he gave the grades away untill we got a newer teacher and she was rough. great poem |
| On May 7th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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i like it! |
| On April 17th 2007 cmadison09 Said : | |
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johnny has a gun |
| On April 16th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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Biology, I liked that class. |
| On April 16th 2007 ihatey0us0much Said : | |
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I don't get it... But I like it anyways! |
