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The 2nd vers. of "A Second to Describe".Rate this Poem
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Love Is a Murderer
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Created on 5-31-07
And I can still remember
The one which was our love starter
Friendship comes first
And enemies might be last
Loved you so much
But then my heart was crushed
You said those words
Why must love hurts?
I knew it from the beginning
You lied and played my feelings
And now I can see your true face
As you left me bleeding without a trace..
The one which was our love starter
Friendship comes first
And enemies might be last
Loved you so much
But then my heart was crushed
You said those words
Why must love hurts?
I knew it from the beginning
You lied and played my feelings
And now I can see your true face
As you left me bleeding without a trace..
Please Login to post comments| On June 13th 2007 Toxxicduck Said : | |
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I dont like it when this happens. But we are teenagers, so we might as well be expecting it. |
| On May 31st 2007 rockgeek135 Said : | |
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this is a great poem!!! |
| On May 31st 2007 Jesz92 Said : | |
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This is the second version of my last poem, "A Second to Describe".. |
