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A Second to Describe
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Created on 5-29-07
For love sake
Even a ship you could make
But when things turned bad
You tend to get mad
You said things you weren’t supposed to
This tears my heart into two
One advice for you, my dear
Try looking in the mirror
Day and night I’ll pray for you
Please stop whatever you’re trying to do
I tried my best to tell how much I missed you
But I’m sorry, it’s too late, I’m leaving you…
Even a ship you could make
But when things turned bad
You tend to get mad
You said things you weren’t supposed to
This tears my heart into two
One advice for you, my dear
Try looking in the mirror
Day and night I’ll pray for you
Please stop whatever you’re trying to do
I tried my best to tell how much I missed you
But I’m sorry, it’s too late, I’m leaving you…
Please Login to post comments| On June 13th 2007 Toxxicduck Said : | |
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haha, sounds like you showed the person you where writing about! If they wont listen to you, then there will be hardly a future for you two. Oops I rhymed on accident again! |
| On May 30th 2007 Jesz92 Said : | |
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For a very short poem, i didn't expect to get up till 49 views and 6 votes by just about 2 days posting it..cool! haha.. comments please dear readers.. |
| On May 29th 2007 Jesz92 Said : | |
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Short but touching.. |
