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Permanent Visit to Hell
Here’s your permanent visit to hell
A person like you should be tortured very well
Let’s see how long you can survive
‘Cause the slightest mistake makes you pay with your life
Yea, sure, now you’re scared
Saying you’re sorry, begging me to forgive
Should I show mercy to one who never cared?
Nah…I should make you suffer and never let you leave
Maybe here you can remember
Who you were and whatsoever
You should know that you’re unlikable
‘Cause all you do is playing invisible
You never thought of peoples’ feelings
You made them live with your stupid disciplines
You think you can live in that level of yours?
Ha-ha! I don’t think u know that you’re one of the losers
Sorry if this poem is kinda harsh
But hey, I said nothing but the truth
You had your days, now I wanna have mine
May your days be dark with nothing to shine… Muahahahaha!!! >=)
A person like you should be tortured very well
Let’s see how long you can survive
‘Cause the slightest mistake makes you pay with your life
Yea, sure, now you’re scared
Saying you’re sorry, begging me to forgive
Should I show mercy to one who never cared?
Nah…I should make you suffer and never let you leave
Maybe here you can remember
Who you were and whatsoever
You should know that you’re unlikable
‘Cause all you do is playing invisible
You never thought of peoples’ feelings
You made them live with your stupid disciplines
You think you can live in that level of yours?
Ha-ha! I don’t think u know that you’re one of the losers
Sorry if this poem is kinda harsh
But hey, I said nothing but the truth
You had your days, now I wanna have mine
May your days be dark with nothing to shine… Muahahahaha!!! >=)
| On June 13th 2007 Toxxicduck Said : | |
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haha you said dumbo....I really really like this one! Wrath is sometimes the only way to go! Your Perminent Visit to Hell sounds more like your moving, instead of visiting, haah. |
| On May 28th 2007 Jesz92 Said : | |
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Wrote it with full of truth and honesty.. That dumbo really desereves it..HAH! |


