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Suicide Hotline

Views (334) Anger Created on 4-17-08 Flag
I'm thinking of killing myself
and just want to tell someone
my parents never listen
never let me have any fun

I don't have any friends
the kids at school pick on me
with all their little cliques
calling me fat and ugly

operator

yes, yes I understand
it's a story that's often told
can you stay on the line
I need to put you on hold

I'm sorry but I just have to
there's a call I need to answer
a ten year old wants to die
he's been diagnosed with cancer

then there's a woman
who wants to end it all
her ex boyfriend raped her
then broke her jaw

next, I have a couple
who had a son die in Iraq
they no longer want to live
since he's not coming back

oh and did I forget to mention
the others at the end of their rope
seems like the whole world is calling
even, faith, love and hope

Ain't life a bi*ch
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On April 21st 2008 xashleyrosex Said :
xashleyrosex i know someone that just died in iraq [r.i.p jason] but anyways this poem is really good!
On April 19th 2008 InvisibleFlame Said :
InvisibleFlame Excellently written!
On April 19th 2008 emily28793 Said :
emily28793 it's very sad...but that's life sumtimes i guess...really well written....fantastic job...congrats
On April 19th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth At first I read it from the first caller perspective (the one being called fat and ugly) and I thought maybe you were trying to relay to this person the grief of others to help them realize how menial their problem was by comparison, BUT by the end it took on a different meaning for me. Pain is the same across the board and many will have thoughts of ending their life just to end their personal grief. The line EVEN faith, love and hope…being stated as even they are calling…I thought was genius!!! A dark day indeed when the answers to our problems are calling the suicide hotline with their own problems. lol Ain’t life a bi*ch!
On April 19th 2008 surferchic89 Said :
surferchic89 Its great, I love it, but why did you end it like you did???? I don't like the last line that much.....
On April 18th 2008 mackenzie3893 Said :
mackenzie3893 I like it. The ending isnt my favorite but it was still good.
On April 18th 2008 NeuroticErin Said :
NeuroticErin Aww, sad, but amazing work.
On April 17th 2008 TheBranster Said :
TheBranster well geez, you sure know how to play the role of Captain Bring-down
On April 17th 2008 JAiDyLeE Said :
JAiDyLeE Very good.i love it! kinda how i feel right now
On April 17th 2008 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb sad sad indeed
On April 17th 2008 numbbbb0z Said :
numbbbb0z True, charlie, True. Diggin' them blues this is a song. How ineffective is the society of our generalized people walkin' amongst themselves, now.
On April 17th 2008 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said :
xXEmoxGirlx3Xx wow..i love it
On April 17th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said :
ALIESAM21 wow...thats cool.
On April 17th 2008 feather1904 Said :
feather1904 wow.thats how i feel now. but anyways kmp plz
On April 17th 2008 moosegurl01 Said :
moosegurl01 sad but a very nice poem
On April 17th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem Wow it's so sad! :( I like it though.
On April 17th 2008 carlieanne9 Said :
carlieanne9 makes you think love it!
On April 17th 2008 gorjuzkisses Said :
gorjuzkisses i love it